From 7c82d830efb2ceaf665e4c7489f934a675a2f506 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Magnus Hagander <magnus@hagander.net>
Date: Fri, 16 Apr 2010 14:36:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Typo patrol, per Dave Page

---
 template/add.tmpl    | 6 +++---
 template/policy.tmpl | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/template/add.tmpl b/template/add.tmpl
index 8a24281..6cf5c4f 100644
--- a/template/add.tmpl
+++ b/template/add.tmpl
@@ -6,16 +6,16 @@ Adding your blog to Planet PostgreSQL is simple, and we encourage all people
 who blog about PostgreSQL to do it. Just follow the steps below:
 </p>
 <ol>
- <li>Make sure your blog follow the <a href="/policy.html">policy</a>.</li>
+ <li>Make sure your blog follows the <a href="/policy.html">policy</a>.</li>
  <li>If you don't have one already, 
   <a href="http://wwwmaster.postgresql.org/community/signup">sign up</a>
   for a PostgreSQL Community Account (same as is used for example for
-  the PostgreSQL <a href="http://wiki.postgresql.org">wiki</a>.
+  the PostgreSQL <a href="http://wiki.postgresql.org">wiki</a>).
  </li>
  <li>Go to the <a href="/register/">registration</a> website, and add
   your blog.</li>
  <li>Wait for the blog to get approved by the
   <a href="mailto:planet _at_ postgresql.org">moderators</a>.</li>
- <li>Wait up to 15 minutes for your posts to show up.</li>
+ <li>Wait up to 15 minutes for syndication of your blog to begin.</li>
 </ol>
 {%endblock%}
diff --git a/template/policy.tmpl b/template/policy.tmpl
index 86dd5a1..51f7b5d 100644
--- a/template/policy.tmpl
+++ b/template/policy.tmpl
@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@ The following simple rules cover the blogs being listed on Planet PostgreSQL:
      category/tag/label, and use the feed for this category only for Planet PostgreSQL.</li>
  <li>All topics related to PostgreSQL are of course appreciated - both technical and
      non-technical.</li>
- <li>All posts should be in English. If you want to blog multilingual, please put
+ <li>All posts should be in English. If you want to blog in other languages, please put
      your PostgreSQL specific posts in a separate category/tag/label, and use the feed for
      this category only for Planet PostgreSQL.</li>
  <li>All blogs should be identified by the posters name. A nickname is allowed to be used
      in combination with this, but blogs without names are not allowed.</li>
- <li>Avoid inflammatory posts or personal attacks in posts syndicated.</li>
+ <li>Avoid inflammatory comments in syndicated posts. Personal attacks are not permitted.</li>
  <li>Publishing of advertising in the syndicated part of your blog is not permitted</li>
 </ul>
 <p>Violating these rules will cause your blog to be removed from Planet PostgreSQL.</p>
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