Updated with feedback from -hackers on 20170209 release

diff --git a/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.md b/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.md
index 7d0b9acca43d51f22bc93c02c76963e772445e70..01ee74136eda094a82cec63252680008da9b7a80 100644 (file)
--- a/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.md
+++ b/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.md
@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ Bug Fixes and Improvements
 
 This update also fixes a number of bugs reported in the last few months. Some of these issues affect only the 9.6 series, but many affect all supported versions.  There are more than 75 fixes provided in this release, including:
 
-* Several fixes for PostgreSQL operating in hot standby mode
+* Several fixes for operating in hot standby mode
 * Disallow setting the num_sync field to zero in synchronous_standby_names
 * Don't count background worker processes against a user's connection limit
 * Fix check for when an extension member object can be dropped
 * Fix tracking of initial privileges for extension member objects so that it works correctly with ALTER EXTENSION ... ADD/DROP
-* Several vacuum and autovacuum fxies
+* Several vacuum and autovacuum fixes
 * Fix CREATE OR REPLACE VIEW to update the view query before attempting to apply the new view options
 * Make sure ALTER TABLE preserves index tablespace assignments when rebuilding indexes
 * Several fixes to the query planner, including fixes for foreign tables and CTEs
@@ -64,7 +64,6 @@ This update also fixes a number of bugs reported in the last few months. Some of
 * Several fixes to PL/pgSQL, PL/Python, and PL/Tcl
 * Several fixes for contrib modules
 * Allow DOS-style line endings in ~/.pgpass files, even on Unix
-* Sync our copy of the timezone library with IANA release tzcode2016j
 
 Update time zone data files to tzdata release 2016j for DST law changes in northern Cyprus (adding a new zone Asia/Famagusta), Russia (adding a new zone Europe/Saratov), Tonga, and Antarctica/Casey. Historical corrections for Italy, Kazakhstan, Malta, and Palestine. Switch to preferring numeric zone abbreviations for Tonga.
 
@@ -75,10 +74,8 @@ All PostgreSQL update releases are cumulative. As with other minor releases, use
 
 If you believe you have been affected by the aforementioned CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY bug, you will have to rebuild the index.  An example of rebuilding an index:
 
-    BEGIN;
     DROP INDEX bad_index_name;
     CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY bad_index_name ON table_name (column_name); /* replace names with your original index definition */
-    COMMIT;
 
 Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run additional, post-update steps; please see the release notes for earlier versions for details.
 

diff --git a/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.txt b/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.txt
index c15d8942aa64908b7951f6faf265e885861e6faa..f90d4716f240dbea4cca647b099f79865545b633 100644 (file)
--- a/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.txt
+++ b/update_releases/current/20170209updaterelease.txt
@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ Bug Fixes and Improvements
 
 This update also fixes a number of bugs reported in the last few months. Some of these issues affect only the 9.6 series, but many affect all supported versions.  There are more than 75 fixes provided in this release, including:
 
-* Several fixes for PostgreSQL operating in hot standby mode
+* Several fixes for operating in hot standby mode
 * Disallow setting the num_sync field to zero in synchronous_standby_names
 * Don't count background worker processes against a user's connection limit
 * Fix check for when an extension member object can be dropped
 * Fix tracking of initial privileges for extension member objects so that it works correctly with ALTER EXTENSION ... ADD/DROP
-* Several vacuum and autovacuum fxies
+* Several vacuum and autovacuum fixes
 * Fix CREATE OR REPLACE VIEW to update the view query before attempting to apply the new view options
 * Make sure ALTER TABLE preserves index tablespace assignments when rebuilding indexes
 * Several fixes to the query planner, including fixes for foreign tables and CTEs
@@ -64,7 +64,6 @@ This update also fixes a number of bugs reported in the last few months. Some of
 * Several fixes to PL/pgSQL, PL/Python, and PL/Tcl
 * Several fixes for contrib modules
 * Allow DOS-style line endings in ~/.pgpass files, even on Unix
-* Sync our copy of the timezone library with IANA release tzcode2016j
 
 Update time zone data files to tzdata release 2016j for DST law changes in northern Cyprus (adding a new zone Asia/Famagusta), Russia (adding a new zone Europe/Saratov), Tonga, and Antarctica/Casey. Historical corrections for Italy, Kazakhstan, Malta, and Palestine. Switch to preferring numeric zone abbreviations for Tonga.
 
@@ -75,10 +74,8 @@ All PostgreSQL update releases are cumulative. As with other minor releases, use
 
 If you believe you have been affected by the aforementioned CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY bug, you will have to rebuild the index.  An example of rebuilding an index:
 
-    BEGIN;
     DROP INDEX bad_index_name;
     CREATE INDEX CONCURRENTLY bad_index_name ON table_name (column_name); /* replace names with your original index definition */
-    COMMIT;
 
 Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run additional, post-update steps; please see the release notes for earlier versions for details.