From: Sarah Conway Schnurr <sarah.conway@crunchydata.com>
Date: Sun, 30 Jun 2019 23:53:22 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: Reword
X-Git-Url: http://git.postgresql.org/gitweb/static/gitweb.js?a=commitdiff_plain;h=77dc162231ba7414cf32832ad2ec5519c0b0df60;p=pgopen2019.git

Reword
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diff --git a/templates/pages/becomesponsor.html b/templates/pages/becomesponsor.html
index b7d925a..ddaeb14 100644
--- a/templates/pages/becomesponsor.html
+++ b/templates/pages/becomesponsor.html
@@ -13,25 +13,27 @@
   PostgresOpen is a perfect opportunity for companies to reach
   out to users and developers of PostgreSQL, or to just "give back" to the
   community. Our sponsorship program covers a wide range of levels, from Supporter
-  to Diamond. If you have any questions or concerns with sponsoring the conference,
-  please send us an email at <a href="mailto:sponsors@postgresopen.org">sponsors@postgresopen.org</a>.
+  to Diamond.
 </p>
 <p>
-  You can sign up to be a sponsor on PostgreSQL US,
+  You can sign up to be a sponsor through PostgreSQL US and find out more information about the process
   <a href="https://postgresql.us/events/sponsor/signup/pgopen2019/">through this form</a>.
-  Additional information on our sponsorship levels can be found through the above link. Alternatively,
-  if you're curious in just the PostgresOpen prospectus itself, you can find it  
+  Alternatively, if you're curious in the PostgresOpen prospectus itself, you can find a PDF download
   <b><a href="{{media("files/prospectus_2019.pdf")}}">here!</a></b>
 </p>
 <p>
   PostgresOpen abides by the PostgreSQL Project <a href="https://www.postgresql.org/community/recognition/">Community Recognition guidelines</a>.
 </p>
 <p>
-  When working with individual companies on sponsorship, PostgresOpen and <a href="{{pguslink("")}}">PgUS</a> will only consider changes to
+  When working with individual companies on sponsorship, PostgresOpen and <a href="{{pguslink("")}}">PostgreSQL US</a> will only consider changes to
   the sponsorship contract which do not impact the material benefits provided to a given company or the cost of the sponsorship. The determination
   of what is considered a material benefit will be decided by the PostgresOpen operations committee and PgUS, as the signing authority. No changes
   to the benefits included in the prospectus will be accepted, nor will any sponsorship discounts be provided.
 </p>
-
+<p>
+  If you have any questions or concerns with sponsoring the conference,
+  please feel free to send us an email at
+  <a href="mailto:sponsors@postgresopen.org">sponsors@postgresopen.org</a>!
+</p>
 
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